Patter helps to gain interest, but you don't always need patter throughout. Just make sure the first jump is slow and deliberate, or else the audience doesn't know what they're watching. The only beef I have was the ending, it felt forced and not as amazing or smooth as it could've been. Also, your hands are kind of cocked up slightly and it suggests that your palm is on the table... relax man! Your hands will have the illusion of being above the table if you flatten them slightly. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll smooth it all out. Great job
