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 Post subject: Into the Darkness - My NEW Horror Film
PostPosted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 8:14 pm 
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2e5MKVN23PQ

Leave some feedback and tell me what you think guys!


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 Post subject: Re: Into the Darkness - My NEW Horror Film
PostPosted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 10:28 am 
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First shot, I would say:
1. wait a couple seconds, then start talking.
2. About 7-9 seconds after you start talking, have a close-up of your face with the phone. (Close-ups are almost always a good thing. In my opinion. I love them in movies.)

Gunshot:
I would just say, the music isn't the best choice. Just my opinion though.

My computer's dark, and I don't want to criticize the lighting because of that, but as for the lighting, I know you're shooting on-location, but the position of the lights could be better in shots.

When the one guy says "dammit", I didn't know why he said it. It might have been my dark screen...

The blood splatter was kind of forced.

Overall, it was pretty good. The ending was...weird. I dunno, I think you've done better though, but it definitely shows that you're learning.


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 Post subject: Re: Into the Darkness - My NEW Horror Film
PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:43 pm 
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I thinnk with the opening, you should've either waited a couple seconds to start talking or make the fade in longer and have a good bit of the conversation during the fade in. You two aren't terrific actors, lighting had some problems, and I saw the cameraman's shadow a few times but it was still pretty good. Especially for your age. Definately something to be proud of.


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