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 Post subject: Short Film - "Believe In Magic"
PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:25 am 
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Hey guys,
So recently I've wanted to get more into short films so i decided why not start with something associated with magic?
It's a 30 second short which was entirely created by myself; directed, edited, produced the beat, color corrected and was the "actor".

Hope you enjoy. Please I would love as much feedback as possible. I would love to one day direct so I see this as a good starting point.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AyAVMwxfZts

Update: Teaser Trailer for my next short film is online!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G3OloXMM3pM


Thanks,
-Sean


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 Post subject: Re: Short Film - "Believe In Magic"
PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:45 pm 
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Well it was too short. I was waiting for it to start, honestly...and then it ended. The whole thing seemed like an introduction.

Other than that, I would have picked a different shot of the first color-change. I would've picked one where it changes from red to black or vice versa.

The angles, mostly, looked good. But It was kind of weird seeing a poker table, and then just seeing random tricks.
The first coin trick I really don't see what's going on, it seems like you may have just dropped the coin and then showed an empty hand. I would also take the rubber bands off your wrist, they kind of take away from the feel of the video.


Well, those are my thoughts. Keep it up.


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 Post subject: Re: Short Film - "Believe In Magic"
PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 12:44 pm 
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"Believe" and "In" are farther apart then "In" and "Magic". What's with that, it looks kinda messed up. And also, less intro and more tricks could be better. Or at least make it longer for a few more tricks. Now it looks more like a gambling video than an magic one.

p.s.: What's with the second video. You really know how to keep em short xD

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