never mind I'll stick we the original it's either a rap, or a poem, or whatever, anyway, hope you liek it...
I wike payngwin mageek
Penguin Magic shopping spree
First D-lights and Killer Key
I have to get the DVD's
and a Noblezada T'
There's just so many tings I need
like Royal Road and also Greed
an elegant gold PK ring
and Penguin cups, oh yes indeed
how about a Sponge Ding Dong
the shipping doesn't take too long
and best of all the shippings free
if twenty dollars you exceed
Color Chnages isn't bad
and plus the Muscle pass is rad
not to mention STS
ah what the edited, I'll buy the rest
Tim Trono's Branded is essential
with all this stuff I've got potential
I need Magicard and Closer
a handkerchief to hide exposure
Super Sharpie last's a while
Oz's braces let him smile
no one likes a trick that's vile
appearing rose is more my style
I want everything they've got
Liquid Metal and On the Spot
of course a Rabbit Mirror Box
and a nice new Spirit clock
Of all the products penguin has
just one thing goes beyond the jazz
it's not the Thumb Tips I like most
but all the members the forum hosts.
well that's what i got...
You started out strong on this, I found myself getting into the first stanza, but it fell flat in the 3rd stanza. Good attempt though.
Oh and I am not going to enter this time, seeing as I have already won 3 times,(should have been 4...), and I am the reigning poem champ(I don't want my title taken from me, so I will just hand it off.