http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LeT_amI1sF8

Possibly the best I'v made so far. Hope you guys enjoy it. Comments are appreciated.

That was superb! Absolutely excellent! Bravo!

Seriously man, this was great.

The audio, for the most part was one of the biggest improvements. There were a couple of mumbles here and there, but nothing to bad. (Obviously the story, editing, acting, and filming also showed improvements)

Truly excellent work though, honestly...I predict you becoming the next James Rolfe...lol

Thanks man! That really means a lot! Thanks for the subscription too!

No problem, you deserve it! Ha ha. But honestly, I subscribed because I want to see more...lol

haha you will!

That was pretty awesome. Chris thought so too. I agree I think it was produced way better though. The acting was really good too.

haha thanks! Adrian (the black kid who lives) and Tyler (The fitted kid who is hit with the ax) both feel bad about the way they acted, which, really wasn't that bad. So to say it's still good acting is a good thing to hear! Thanks!

Yeah it wasn't necessarily bad at all, but it might just sound a little scripted. No problem though. I thought Adrian was good.

Not bad at all Phil! Looks good, and you kept my attention for 8 minutes, so it was pretty good!

-JT

woo! Thanks dud e glad you liked it haha

Bloopers:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u3fADbx6vFM

That was great! Loved best acting I've seen from people outside of television and movies for a long time. It's rare that I sit and just watch a video on Youtube for 8 minutes other than a magic video, awesome plot. The only suggestion I can give is from an editing standpoint; in the beginning it was a little choppy with the cuts. Aside from that it was brilliant.