Okay, as a person that did graphic design for 4 years (even if only as a hobby) I want to say with all honesty - and not to sound rude although it will sound it - that is definitely not a professional business card. If you're a graphic designer, prove it with a good design on the card. To me, that could be done by a person using Photoshop for 1 week using tutorials. Now, I am sure it took more time than it looks as it often does but that is not an example I'd expect to see from a professional graphic designer. So with that being said, if you rework it with everybody's constructive criticism, then you can go along way.
i agree with KrisDeagle 100%
I'm not a graphic designer but i work in architecture and have the degree and actually do 3d modeling and rendering. And this card does look like it could be done with someone with limited photoshop knowledge, or some web template. If you had gone to to university or other places to learn graphic design then i think this card should of looked way better.
- No real integration with the text and the background. Its like you got a cool image, and just added text to it.
- No phone number
- Spelling is Wrong (unless your country spells it that way)
- I'm not so convince you 3d modeled that background image, why would you put a stone texture on what looks like a steel or futuristic gear. And what on earth is that block on the bottom? What is it? And the rendering appears to be faceted and low poly count. It should look better.